Untitled 12 (2015)

26 May

untitled 5.23.15

This piece is untitled and I’m not certain that it is also unfinished.  I feel like there is too much white space and wondered if any of you viewing the piece could help me perfect it with some ideas about what you would do if you would do anything.  Its just one of those pieces that doesn’t feel quite “done” yet.  Thanks, your feedback/advice will be really helpful.

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4 Responses to “Untitled 12 (2015)”

  1. Claudia McGill May 26, 2015 at 3:35 pm #

    When I am uncertain, I will set the piece aside, putting it somewhere I can see it as I go around the house or whatever, but not focus on. Sort of living with it will tell you if you it needs more or is finished, I have found, and usually after only a few days. (You will love it or you will say, I can’t stand it, I must change -whatever-right now!)

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    • said-simply May 26, 2015 at 4:29 pm #

      Claudia, thank you that is really helpful. I actually did that. I have placed in it a prominent place so I see it when I’m going here or there inside my place. I hope it will either let me know what to add or let me sense that it is finished. Thanks again, great comment!

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  2. weisserwatercolours May 26, 2015 at 6:22 pm #

    I think it holds the space and balances the tensions very well. I like it very much.

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    • said-simply May 26, 2015 at 6:43 pm #

      Thank you so much for your feedback. I really value what you wrote here.

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